Friday, August 14, 2009

A Face in the Shadow Part 2 Chapter 43


Rachel nibbled at a cheese Danish from the snack table and waited for Carol. Over and over she had played the scenes of the roses and each time marveled that there was no longer any fear there.

“Thank you for waiting.” Carol said and sat down.

“No problem.” Rachel pushed her Danish to the side and faced Carol.

“What did you think of tonight.”

“It wasn’t what I expected.” Rachel reached into her bag to retrieve her notes. “But it was fine.”

Carol tore off a piece of a donut and popped it in her mouth. She chewed slowly for a moment then smiled and faced Rachel head-on. “I think you got exactly what you were looking for tonight.”

Rachel paused for a long moment then, realized she was staring and looked away. In a way she had. She felt completely safe for the first time in a long time. But that’s not what Carol meant. Carol was just like every other religious person. She was looking for Rachel to get saved.

“I can tell by the look on your face you didn’t like my response.” Carol pushed aside the donut she’d been munching on and looked right at Rachel. “It’s not my place to pry but what did bring you here tonight Rachel?”

Rachel considered the question for a moment. She’d come here to escape the fear and to impress a guy. “I came because I’ve followed your career and was eager to meet you.”

“That could be why you came here but that is not why you’re here tonight.”

“Then why am I here?” Rachel recoiled, shocked at her own tone.

“I don’t believe in coincidence. If I’m wrong and you haven’t yet found what you’re looking for, you’ll find it soon.”

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